DW/Narnia: From a World More Full of Weeping, by Azar.

[thady]

FANDOM: Doctor Who/The Chronicles of Narnia
FIC LINK: From a World More Full of Weeping.
AUTHOR LINK: Azar
RATING/WARNING(S): PG
WIP?/WORD COUNT: one-shot | ~ 3,080 words
MAIN CHARACTERS: Susan Pevensie, 10th Doctor, OCs

FIC SUMMARY: Two people meet who have nothing in common… except a world of loss.

RECCER'S NOTES:

This is a great crossover, which is so believable. I love Susan here, her voice, her grief and how she handles it (or not), and how she grows.
There is hope here, even with the sadness.

Comments

[thady]

I saw the rec before the comment. I think it's a good rec, it certainly got me reading.

Do you want me to tell you a few things I've noticed? WIth the html, and such? I don't mind if you don't mind :)

[heliopausa]

Yes, please. :)
I could try to make a Narnia rec every couple of weeks - that way I'd get plenty of practice in the coding!

[thady]

Good :) I didn't want to offer unsolicited advice.
I hope I don't get too nitpicky...

-) It is common to indicate crossover with a slash (fandom 1/fandom 2) but not necessary.


-) rating: I know it used to be common to rate gen-stories with "gen", but it is more usual now to use movie ratings. I usually use to ratings given by the author (in this case it would be PG-13, which would be equivalent to T (Teen).

-) tags (in general): You can look at the tags page to decide which tags you want to add. For this story I would add for example: crossover, hijinks ensue, humor, wacky adventures.

-) fandom tags: for this community the fandom tags start with - fandom:
I would also list both fandom seperately.
In this case it would be: "- fandom: the chronicles of narnia", "- fandom: rpf" (without the quotation marks).

I hope that help and I explained everything plainly.

Edit: They must have changed something how you link to users. I just don't have the time right now to go over it. I'll add to this comment later on. Sorry.

Edit the 2nd: Here is the dreamwidth FAQ site to linking to other users. I do not know whether I can explain it better.


Also: I would love to read more Narnia stories, so I'm all for more recs! :)

[heliopausa]

Thank you! I've started the editing. :)
One thing that bothered me was the "rough language" note I put in, which I've left for the time being - is there a better way to put this? or is it covered by PG-13, would you say?
I'll stay tuned for the update about linking to non-DW authors.

[thady]

I had edited the last comment about linking to other users, but I see you alrady put it to right.

I've only ever seen it as language (or strong language). I've also seen the rating combined with the reason for it, e.g. PG-13 for language. PG-13 not only covers cursing, but also violence, sexual content, drug usage. Citing one reason for the rating implies the lack of these other things however.
I've often seen PG-13 used without a qualifier. It would be alright too.

I've seen however, that your tags got a bit messed up. It might have happened becuase you used a semi-colon instead of a comma. Tags are always seperated with a comma.

In this case, it would be:

- fandom: the chronicles of narnia, - fandom: rpf, crossover, hijinks ensue, ...

I'm sorry, I should have noticed the last time already, and told you then. I've thought you meant to indicate a crossover.

I hope this helped a bit. :)

[heliopausa]

Thanks for the tip re: tags and commas. Bit by bit I'll learn the system! :)

[thady]

It took me a while too. I'm happy to help. :)